Sunday, January 29, 2012

prompt number three

Looking in that photo album I see my mom and dads wedding. The bright colors of the brides maids dresses and the funky hair do's that they chose. I look back and notice how things have changed. The styles of dresses and hair were considered fashionable back then but not so much today.
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  1. johngoldfineJanuary 31, 2012 at 4:43 AM

    "I look back and notice how things have changed. The styles of dresses and hair"

    Try a rewrite--offer your audience the details. What things? What were those styles, describe them.

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